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Showing posts with label tercet. Show all posts
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Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Swannet


This form whilst not the creation of the Canadian poet, Gloria Carpenter, it has become her trademark being used in conjunction with her elemental and avian photo studies in British Columbia.
It is a straight forward form comprising of 3 envelope stanzas and a couplet.
The rhyme scheme is .A1. b. b. A2... c. d. d. c... e. f. f. e... A1. A2.
The meter is not specified but is usualy tetrameter or pentameter.


Example Poem:

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (Swannet )

When you are angry, words should be deferred. 
If anger stems from blunder of my own 
I'll not be defensive to quiet tone. 
A voice in dulcet tones is much preferred.

Perhaps, the words should simply disappear 
for now, until your anger can abate. 
There's nothing risked delaying words that grate. 
Unleashed, harsh words will travel like a spear.

We're lovers so we want to get this right. 
If you should softly speak of your despair 
I will want to facilitate repair. 
My love, use whispers closely late tonight.

When you are angry, words should be deferred. 
A voice in dulcet tones is much preferred. 

(c) Lawrencealot - November, 2012


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Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Rainis Sonnet


Rainis Sonnet is a short meditation. Whether or not it is a true sonnet is up for debate. It is a lyrical meditation with a turn or volta, however it is shorter than the usual quatorzain of the sonnet. It is named for the Latvian philosopher and poet Janis Rainis (1868-1929)

Rainis Sonnet is:
• written in 9 lines made up of a quatrain, followed by a tercet ending with a couplet.
• metered, primarily iambic pentameter.
• rhymed, turned on only 3 rhymes. Rhyme scheme abab (cbc or cac) and (aa or bb or cc).

abab cbc aa
abab cbc bb
abab cbc cc
abab cac aa
abab cac bb
abab cac cc
abab cac aa
written with the epiphany arriving in the tercet.

Example Poem:

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (Rainis  Sonnet)

Should you be moved to speak in anger, dear, 
I ask that first you test your words alone. 
You'll want to be assured your meaning's clear. 
If anger stems from blunder of my own 

There's nothing risked delaying words that grate. 
Then speak in dulcet soft and husky tone. 
I'll listen, think, and I'll appreciate. 

My love, use whispers closely late tonight. 
I love you dearly, I will make it right. 

© Larry Eberhart, aka, Lawrencealot,  Oct. 11, 2012

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