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Saturday, December 22, 2012

Mason Sonnet


The Mason Sonnet is an invented sonnet form created by American poet Madeline Mason in 1953. It is the rhyme scheme that sets this sonnet apart from others. This was found in the Study and Writing of Poetry; American Women Poets Discuss, 1983 and has been used in workshops 
throughout the US

* a quatorzain made up of a octave and a sestet.
* metered, iambic pentameter.
Rhyme pattern: abcabcbc dbadda
* composed with a pivot developed after the octave.

Example Poem:

Grow up Slowly        (Mason Sonnet)

I like to go to grammas' after school.
I show her what I learned today then play,
or learn a lot of stuff not in a book.
She showed me how to milk a cow. That's cool.
She showed me on the internet today.
But best of all she lets me help her cook!
We made gingerbread cookies; Grandpa took
a lot so I think they turned out okay.

Don't know what I'll  be when my growing's done,
A cook? A fireman? It's too hard to say. 
If you think I change my mind a lot, you'll
be right. My mom says choosing's half the fun.
"Take time to be a  kid and play and run."
Right now that's my grandparent's golden rule.

     © Lawrencealot - December 21, 2012

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Thursday, December 6, 2012

Canadian Sonnet - Italian Structure


This is a form invented by Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines
 Unique in  presentation as 2 quatrains + 2 Tercets
Generally Iambic Pentameter
Volta at line 9
Rhyme Scheme: abba cddc eff egg 
Same rhyme pattern as Bowlesian Sonnet.

Example Poem: 

Today's Best     ( Canadian  Sonnet - Italian Structure )

The editor demands my very best
with ocean's depth and pictures for one's mind.
Let waterfalls of syllables combine
while melodies of sounds they manifest.

Just that and nothing less is all that's asked.
The pen is poised and pauses while I think -
perhaps I scratch my beard and sip a drink,
before returning, determined, to my task.

Oh, hell! How often does one sit to write
a piece of crap to merely fill a page?
Real poets don't do that in any age.

We never set out trying to be trite.
Our very best attempt are made in vain
When mind's creative cogs get clogged again.

© Lawrencealot - December 5th, 2012

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Wednesday, December 5, 2012

French Canadian Sonnet


This is a form invented by Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines

2 quatrain + couplet + quatrain
Pentamer or Hexamter
Volta at line 9
Rhyme Scheme: abba cddc ee fggf

Example Poem:

Squawk Talk                        (French Canadian Sonnet)

"I need to have a word with you," the seagull said. 
"You armed with notepad, looking pensively astute." 
"Yes, muse," I mumbled, "go ahead,  you're being cute." 
The seagull squawked and startled me then turned his head. 

"You dolt on doves and rave about the ravens' clout, 
you're high on nightingales, and hummingbirds, and owls. 
You write of raptors' might as they kill birds and fowls 
Yet we're ignored almost. Explain what that's about." 

"Opportunistic, smart, existing everywhere 
with precocial chicks  and flight, why do you care? 

Like man you find your food almost in anyplace, 
and flock with mobbing to dissuade aggressive foes.
You're species' success seems to far outweigh your woes. 
and by the way we do admire your flying grace. 

© Lawrencealot - December 5th, 2012


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Thursday, November 29, 2012

Tuckerman’s Sonnet


Tuckerman’s Sonnet – abbabcab adeced
 or abbabcba bdeced

Example Poem:

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (Tuckerman Sonnet)

A silence is most fine thing when irate. 
I'll want to help resolve most any plight. 
If I have blundered then I'll be contrite. 
Emotions can cause words to over state 
But calm approaches help keep troubles slight. 
Attack invokes defense without much thought. 
It's wise of you my dear, therefore, to wait, 
We want to solve a problem, not to fight. 

With cause to pause and think, I shall relate. 
So hold those words for later; don't despair 
for now. Wait 'til your anger can abate. 
Use dulcet tones to reap the goal now sought. 
I'll listen, think, and I'll appreciate. 
Speak whispers, lying close- and I'll be caught. 

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Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Sicilian Sonnet



FORM :

octave + sestet
* volta (pivot) in line 9
* written in iambic pentameter
* rhyme scheme abababab cdccdc  or abababab cdecde


Example Poem:

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers       (Sicilian Sonnet)

Should you be moved to speak in anger dear,
I ask that first you test your words alone.
If I have blundered then I will want to hear
but will not gain from harshness in your tone.
Such words once thrown will travel like a spear
We've both before said words we can't disown.
You'll want to make sure that your meaning's clear;
an err unsaid leaves nothing to atone.

So hold those words for later; don't despair,
there's nothing risked delaying words that grate.
My love, use whispers closely late tonight.
I'll listen to your words- you know I'm fair.
So love, allow your anger to abate.
I love you dearly; I will make it right.


© Lawrencealot - June 21, 2013

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Monday, November 26, 2012

Keats Sonnet


4 tercets + couplet
Iambic Pentameter
Rhyme sceme: abc abd cab cde de 

Example Poem:

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (Keats Sonnet)

Should you be moved to speak in anger dear 
I ask that first you test your words alone. 
If meaning's very clear, then is it fair? 

You'll want to be assured your meaning's clear. 
If anger stems from blunder of my own 
You know I'll fix it and will be contrite. 

Are these first words intended to repair? 
Harsh words once thrown will travel like a spear. 
A mild re-buff will move one to atone. 

No anger's due because you know I care, 
and mistakes are things that can be put right. 
A shared talk always resolves a dispute.  

So whisper concerns to your love, tonight
And by the way darling, I think you're cute. 

(c) Lawrencealot - April 25, 2012




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Italian or Petrarchan Sonnet


An Italian sonnet is composed of an octave, rhyming abbaabba, and a sestet, rhyming cdecde or cdcdcd, or in some variant pattern, but with no closing couplet.

Usually, English and Italian Sonnets have 10 syllables per line, but Italian Sonnets can also have 11 syllables per line.


The Italian sonnet was created by Giacomo da Lentini, head of the Sicilian School under Frederick II. Guittone d'Arezzo rediscovered it and brought it to Tuscany where he adapted it to his language when he founded the Neo-Sicilian School (1235–1294). He wrote almost 300 sonnets. Other Italian poets of the time, including Dante Alighieri (1265–1321) and Guido Cavalcanti (c. 1250–1300) wrote sonnets, but the most famous early sonneteer was Petrarca (known in English as Petrarch).

The Italian sonnet includes two parts. First, the octave (two quatrains, or two groups of four lines), which describe a problem, followed by a sestet (two tercets, two groups of three lines), which gives the resolution to it. Typically, the ninth line creates a "turn" or volta, which signals the move from proposition to resolution. Even in sonnets that don't strictly follow the problem/resolution structure, the ninth line still often marks a volta by signaling a change in the tone, mood, or stance of the poem.

In the sonnets of Giacomo da Lentini, the octave rhymed a-b-a-b, a-b-a-b; later, the a-b-b-a, a-b-b-a pattern became the standard for Italian sonnets. For the sestet there were two different possibilities, c-d-e-c-d-e and c-d-c-c-d-c. In time, other variants on this rhyming scheme were introduced such as c-d-c-d-c-d.

The first known sonnets in English, written by Sir Thomas Wyatt and Henry Howard, Earl of Surrey, used this Italian scheme, as did sonnets by later English poets including John Milton, Thomas Gray, William Wordsworth and Elizabeth Barrett Browning.


Note: In May 2013, I noticed that our own resident sonneteer,  Eusebius had just written a series of Italian Sonnet that did have ending couplet rhyme.  Investigating further I found that C.A.Smith also used that rhyme pattern at least once, in his poem "Belated Love".   Do dear poets, you are free to use ANY sextet rhyme pattern.

Following quote provided by Eusebius:
Poets adopting the Petrarchan sonnet form often adapt the form to their own ends to create various effects. These poets do not necessarily restrict themselves to the strict metrical or rhyme schemes of the traditional Petrarchan form; some use iambic hexameter, while others do not observe the octave-sestet division created by the traditional rhyme scheme. Whatever the changes made by poets exercising artistic license, no "proper" Italian sonnet has more than five different rhymes in it.



Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (Italian Sonnet)

Should you be moved to speak in anger, dear,
I ask that first you test your words alone.
If anger stems from blunder of my own
You'll want to be assured your meaning's clear.
Harsh words once thrown will travel like a spear.
We've both before said words we can't disown,
They're best unsaid than trying to attone.
The thoughts that form those words might disappear.

So hold those words for later; don't despair
There's nothing risked delaying words that grate.
My love, use whispers closely late tonight.
I'll listen to your words- you know I'm fair.
So love, allow your anger to abate.
I love you dearly; I will make it right.


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French Sonnet


Historically, the French sonnet appears sometime after the Italian sonnet
 and was likely the inspiration for the English sonnet form.
It uses fourteen lines of Alexandrine meter (iambic hexameter,
six iambs, twelve syllables per line)

Like the Italian and the English it has an octave comprising two quatrains,
but unlike the Italian and like the English it has a sestet of a couplet and a quatrain.
It is possible that the English sonnet was derived from the French not the Italian.

The difference being that the English grouped the Quatrains together
and turned (Volta) with a couplet the last two lines,
but the French turned with the sestet and used the quatrain to close.

The form has exactly the same quatrain as the Petrarch - a.b.b.a...a.b.b.a.
The sestet begins with a couplet - c.c., but like the Italian sestet, we have a choice of quatrains to play with. - d. e. e. d.
or more French, - d. c. c. d.
or more English - d. e. d. e

abba abba ccdeed
abba abba ccdccd
abba abba ccdede

Example Poem:

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (French Sonnet)

Should you be moved at times to speak in anger, dear, 
I only ask that first you test your words alone. 
Because if anger stems from blunders of my own 
I'm sure you'll want to be assured your meaning's clear. 

Remember words once thrown will travel like a spear 
and meanings take on color weighed much by tone. 
So package words with giggles not with growl or groan 
and then the thoughts that form those words might disappear. 
Delay those words, re-think, and then reformulate. 
and later will be your time to pontificate. 

I stumble much to often; you are usually right.
Is it really essential now that blame be found, 
or can our words proceed toward a common ground? 
My dear, use whispers closely to me late at night. 

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Saturday, November 24, 2012

Chivalric Sonnet

Rhyme scheme – xaxa xbxb xcxc dd
Invented by  Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines
Standard sonnet convetions

Example Poem:

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers  (Chivalric Sonnet)

Should you be moved to speak in anger, dear,
I ask that first you test your words alone.
You'll want to moderate the emotion
if anger stems from blunder of my own.
I'll be a thoughtful listener when calm.
There's nothing risked delaying words that grate.
Perhaps, the words should simply disappear
for now, until your anger can abate.
If I have blundered, I will be contrite.
So hold those words for later; don't despair
A resolution we will find that works.
I'll listen to your words- you know I'm fair.
My love, use whispers closely late tonight.
I love you dearly; I will make it right.


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Friday, November 23, 2012

Betwixt Sonnet


Friday, October 12, 2012
5:28 PM
This form was invented for Sonnet 1327 by
Jose Rizal M. Reyes, of February 26, 2009
format: English (quatrain, quatrain, quatrain, couplet)
rhyming pattern: abba cbbc dbbd bb
IT was named the Betwixt Sonnet on November 13, 2012
by Lawrencealot until I hear otherwise from the 'Fair youth"


Example:
Accidental Me               ( Betwixt Sonnet )

The chances of becoming you were small.
Your mother might have never said okay,
when first she met your father that one day.
Another beau might then have won the call.

The mating might have some how been postponed
or hurried by just seconds either way,
ejaculate could have been washed away,
or killed by spermicide your momma owned.

A simple cough that nudged the winning sperm
decided you'd be who you are today.
But certainly you are your dossier
so fill it up and never act infirm.

The game is being played out everyday
and as for me I find it fun to play.

Lawrencealot - November 13, 2012

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Asean Royal Flush Sonnet


Asean Sonnet is simply an Italian sonnet in mono-rhyme.
Invented by Jose Rizal M. Reyes

The Asean Sonnet is:

 a quatorzain made up of an octave followed by a sestet.
 metric, iambic pentameter.
 mono-rhymed, aaaaaaaa aaaaaa.
turned on the 9th line.

Example Sonnet

Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (Asean Sonnet)



Don't speak in anger or when you're uptight.
At those times one's words overly excite
and seem to others as an undue sleight.
A harsh phrase once set verbally in flight
can't be recalled and must and will alight
and like a flaming arrow, may ignite.
Instead of curing such words will incite
and distance the solution to your plight.

If I have blundered then I'll be contrite.
But calm approaches help make troubles slight.
We want to solve a problem, not to fight.
Now here's the perfect way to do this right.
My love, use whispers closely late tonight.
I love you dearly; I will make it right.

(c) Lawrencealot - October 8, 2012

Thursday, November 22, 2012

Arabian Sonnet


A quatorzain made up of 2 quatrains + 2 tercets.
metric, iambic pentameter.
rhymed, aaaa bbbb ccc ddd.
Volta on the 9th line.



Sample Poem:


Tell Me of Your Anger in Whispers (Arabian Sonnet)

A silence is most fine thing when irate.
It's wise of you my dear, therefore, to wait,
re-think the message goal and contemplate
how goals are reached when embraced by your mate.

If my own blunder may have made you mad
a defensive re tort might well be bad
when thoughtful comment ought to now be had.
Let's frame discussion so to make you glad.

Perhaps, the words should simply disappear.
Unleashed, harsh words will travel like a spear.
Use calm and dulcet tones I love to hear.

We want to solve a problem, not to fight.
My love, use whispers closely late tonight.
I love you dearly; I will make it right.

© Larry Eberhart, aka Lawrencealot

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American Liebre


This is a form invented by Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines
Quatorzian - Normally Iambic Pentameter
Rhyme scheme:  abab bbcc cdcd ee 
(related to English Classic 2 or Spenserian sonnet)
Volta Line 9

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America Forte


 Invented by Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines
Quatrazain
Iambic Petameter
Three Quatrains + Ending couplet
Rhyme Scheme:  abab bbcc cdcd dd

 Associated form: American Libra = abab bbcc cdcd ee

Example Poem

Lead and Follow  (American Forte Sonnet)

Just follow your individual quest.
Pursue what stimulates your mind and soul.
When you've done jobs with care, and done your beat
That's all that counts and that's your only role.

Compare not yourself; other's have their goal,
which may not seem in synch, in part or whole.
You need not better any one, but need
to do your very best, then you succeed.

You may have skills enabling you to lead.
That leadership is not the goal, you see.
But if you can help others when they need
a guide, you just help building their esprit.

Where you should follow, don't compete; be free
to play roles that enhance in small degree.

© Lawrencealot   Oct.16, 2012