This a form of the
super sonnet class invented by
Jose Rizal M. Reyes
on June 9, 2009 This is a triple tailed sonnet
abba bccb cddc dd /
dee dff dgg
3 quatrains +
couplet + 3 tercets
natural place for
the volta is line 13, but poet may choose.
Example poem:
Envy then Punish the
Rich (Germanic Caudated Sonnet)
In every age some chosen few have
ruled
despite the form of government
in place.
Laws are the tools that often
bring disgrace
Eventually when power's overruled.
Entrusted senators, to win their
race
now tell the public what it wants
to hear.
Views shared with some are hushed,
but its clear
your wants
will yield to those more highly placed.
Rich men can fund campaigns and
make appear
Innumerable chances to obtain
considerable wealth with little
pain.
Handshake contracts let fairness
disappear.
`
Indeed we
viewed the scoundrels with disdain
no doubt, but set our course to
our own gain.
Occupy Wall street meant that one would train
until they could perform those
jobs that paid
real bucks for successful
decisions made.
Some joined those rich, and walked
in their terrain
and moved their family's fortunes
up a rung,
denouncing whining as song to be sung.
Alas our masses want the rich
contained;
government must now give
punishment to those
employers rising in the path they
chose.
*
© Lawrencealot
December 1, 2012
It happens that this poem is also an acrostic sonnet.
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