This sonnet form was
invented by Visalakshi , aka Vive la V on Allpoetry
Here are her own
requirements:
(1) Stanzaic :
quatorzain, or octave and sestet.
(2) 10 syllables,
except in the final couplet, which could vary: 10 or 11, but both L13 and L14
should be the same syllable length
(3) It is lexical
where the last word of the first stanza becomes the first/ or beginning of the
first word of the second stanza. This pattern continues to the end.
(4) The sonnet ends
with the same word with which it begins, yes it is a requirement.
(5) Must rhyme.
Rhyme pattern abab cdcd efef g’g (or gg) (near rhymes or exact rhymes)
(6) Volta in L9 or L
13
(7) For this form
there is no metric requirement. It is optional.
Here is my example
We have What's Needed (Sonnet Reversii)
Within us all is something from without.
Without a doubt there's much I can adduce,
adduce some things for you to think about.
About our doubts we have a real excuse.
Excuse me when I claim man's not correct,
correct in thinking gods must be required.
Requiring dogma leaves a disconnect-
a substitute for answers much desired.
Desiring knowledge is, and must remain -
remain a trait to which we must attend.
Attend to learning; try not to complain.
Complaining sigh won't help us to contend-
contend with knowing, "How'd it all begin".
Begin assured, we've all we need within.
© Lawrencealot - April 1, 2014
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So it’s OK to change the form of a words from the end of one line to the beginning of the next one such as required and requiring as well as desired and desiring?
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