Polynesian Wave

This is a sonnet form invented and named by Jose Rizal M. Reyes of the Philippines.

Meter is iambic pentameter

Rhyme Scheme: aaxa bbxb ccxc dd

Example Poem

Colored Poetry (Polynesian Wave)

What means a critique when it comes from me?         

I've not a touch of talent so, you see         

I be a foolish fumbler, in the dark         

with no guidelines for judging Hannelie.         

I chose this form that's close to mono-rhyme        

'cus she promotes one color at a time         

and somehow knows which one to emphasize         

which makes her pictures simple and sublime.         

I like to look at princesses, (and whores)         

and girls who wear bikinis by the shores,         

I don't comprehend each time their appeal,         

I need not know the whys and the wherefores.         

And thus it is when paintings speak to me-         

I'd like a painting wrought by Hannelie.         

© Lawrencealot - November 15, 2013

(This was a contest entry poem.)

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